Sunday, December 20, 2015

Desire Comments

Rating: 5.0

Moonlight batters down on us as we lay upon a green paradise
The stars align, filling the darkess of the sky and imparting balance
Time stops in this moment granting us the privilege of eternal ecstasy
As our hands clench and auras resonate,
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Aaron Julien
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Roseann Shawiak 07 June 2016

Straight from the heart of true love, very articulate and intense, passionately poignant and alluring. Beautiful poem of love, thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Chinedu Dike 23 January 2016

Delicious blend of love, romance, and desire in a well articulated piece of poetry insightfully penned in poetic diction with conviction. A beautiful depiction of the voyage of pure bliss that is love, subtly written from inner recesses of the heart. Thanks for sharing Aaron. Please read my poem THE OBSESSIVE AGONY OF LUST.

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