Friday, September 11, 2015

Desire Comments

Rating: 5.0

Feel the sea taste in the mouth
rivers sweet treeless bog
and the winds brought on by the heat
fountains freshness
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Ari Alsio
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Chinedu Dike 27 October 2015

Beautiful depiction of desire, well articulated, nicely encapsulated, and insightfully penned in poetic diction with conviction. A delicious display of strong romantic desire occasioned by one's primal curiosity. Thanks for sharing Ari. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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