Thursday, September 13, 2012

Desire Comments

Rating: 5.0

Wantan Soul's desire
A souls desires of fulfillment
And everlasting oneness with love
one true love to join in heavenly tangle of limbs.
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Allemagne Roßmann 26 September 2012

les célibataires nouvelle de femme fatale.Mervilleux.Merci beaucoup! Desires are wild like this always.They know no bounds.So they recur.They have had to.Well written.

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Kelly Seale 24 September 2012

ok, like a typical man, I go for the passionate poem on my first read of your words... but, unlike the typical... I was not disapointed, Your words Persian Khushi, are very intense and very heartfelt.... passion from every line, every stanza tastes of disire... I'm impressed and I think I'll read more.... Great Ink! ! ! ; -) -Kelly.

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Saadat Tahir 19 September 2012

strong and almost aromatic....with pheromones wafting off in the gentle breeze that rises from fulfillment. lovely cheers ***

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