Thursday, February 21, 2013

'Desire' Comments

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Her love was a fountain
Birthed from a sparkling mountain stream
Now a torrent of raging desire
His touch sending flames through her being
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persian khushi
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Ramesh Rai 08 July 2013

xlent write. i can not deny the brauty of such beautiful write.

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Nikhil Sharma 24 June 2013

Very nice one....wish you will keep writing and..stay blessed

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Heather Wilkins 01 June 2013

his love raging she his desire to douse his fire. a great thought.

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Harindhar Reddy 06 April 2013

Love is a fountain, mountain, so maintain.......... ha ha! Well write!

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