Desire Comments

Insightful and very heartfelt....

It seems impossible that desire can sometimes transform into devotion; but this has happened. yes it is true, Desire can transform into devotion. thank you for this verse. tony

Heartfelt and beautiful. Thanks for sharing

good job on this poem

Nice message brought out in this poem.

A desire to transform the world for better.....no devotion could be better than this.

what is the pattern or ryhme scheme of this poem

Amazing desire beautifully penned and thought provoking too. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

it is achievable desire... nice poem

This poem is excellent! Why have 23 voters only given it a 6.9 out of ten rating? They should be ashamed.

The profoundness of How the hole I carefully tended in the garden of my heart grew a heart to fill it. It is the hole where the first hert use to be. Simply Profound. #10

Thank you for sharing this deep and profound poem.My soul has received the blesssed spiritual cleansing.Through your wise words.

Beautiful- -beautiful- -beautiful. And wise, So very very very wise about how to go on with life when you have a hole in your heart.

It seems impossible that desire can sometimes transform into devotion; .............................Yes, it's called wisdom.

Wow! A. Walker cultivated and perfected a beautifully written poem. Thank you very much!

A well written poem w It is beautifully told.

Wonderful write, I carefully tended in the garden of my heart grew a heart to fill it.

I want to grow.. how the hole.. nice one

Old should always give place to the new. Nicely composed.

A very well written poem...it is lovely and i like it. Thank you.