Desire Comments

This poem could also have been titled ‘Addiction’ I think. Well done.

here you send a powerfull message, sadiq! the entire force loaded in the last three lines...impressive poem 10

Very powerful poem for a very powerful feeling....

They say that once a person has left us physically, be that due to separation or worse, it's how a person once made us feel that matters, not what they did. If someone gave you this feeling Sadiqullah then they mattered. I love the message in this poem, the last line gives it power: 'Sans love', hmm... worth pondering on. HG: -) xx

Earthly desires are human pleasures though fleeting in a way and the value of happiness is not worthy