Friday, September 16, 2005

Desire Comments

Rating: 4.0

sink yourself into me
let me swallow your needs
and release you to mine
the wind shudders in
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Eila Mahima Jaipaul
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Sensual, wonderful… endowed with apt imagery

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Dr.subhendu Kar 29 October 2007

a versatile yet flinting fire to the desire as it flows in a unique way, well penned as i recommend 10+

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Richard Stilwell 24 September 2005

Oh so lucky the one... Rick

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