Tuesday, March 16, 2010

Desire Comments

Rating: 4.5

i havent felt this emotion for a long time
i just know that i want him to be mine
this desire is growing stronger each day
i must listen to my parents advice i must obey
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Michael Brock 20 April 2010

Youth and budding emotions, good poem...there is strength in knowing what you want. good poem thanks for sharing Michael

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Nickey Mason 19 April 2010

nice poem but i use 2 say i was a gud gurl but we all kno in every gud girl there is a lil evil

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Josh Schultz 15 April 2010

i like your poem, but if your gonna rhyme think about the word a little bit more. I do really like your poem tho

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