Saturday, May 9, 2009

Desire Comments

Rating: 5.0

Our lips had touched softly,
Mouths parting to be,
Our tongues intertwined,
Exploring the depths of the sea.
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Kelly Batson
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Vlad Mutuleanu 13 October 2013

Amazing! one of my favourite poems

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Isaiah Grey 09 May 2009

I love the pacing of this poem. It conveys the steady build up of desire very articulately.

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Kelly Batson

Kelly Batson

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