Wednesday, August 28, 2013

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I greeted the councilor with a smile
Has he comes into the restaurant
My eyes dropped, as I converse with him
Feeling uncomfortable and nervous
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Kayode Ogunleye
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It is not a bad thing at all. A good poem in best of lines and words and loved it.

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Babatunde Aremu 02 October 2013

We all need each other at different levels and occasions. All we need do is to be ready to accomodate. Nice write

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Dinesan Madathil 31 August 2013

A good write with a tale of real life to tell. What I have to say is this... Be patient and be co-operative.. You and he will begin to understand each other soon brother Kayode.

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Onitunu Olu 29 August 2013

kindly read my poem, comment and critique.

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Onitunu Olu 29 August 2013

a bit off. however, a great piece. nice work man. your mind and your thought train...flows like #Tai -chi.

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Gajanan Mishra 28 August 2013

good design, thanks. I like it. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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