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A very unique and interesting way you have placed this conversation in your poem. You have expressed yourself in an understandable form with these difficult statements. Great messages held within these words, poignant and explicit. I always enjoy reading your poetry, you make me think. Thank you, RoseAnn

Very interesting and unique poem, I like how you draw the conversation out through verse. Very poignant message within your words, you expressed yourself very well and made explanations very understandable. Great poem Lawrence. Love your poetry! Thank you, RoseAnn