Friday, October 4, 2013

Deserts And Oasis Comments

Rating: 5.0

A beast in adolescence
Wandering amidst humans
Mouth ajar salivating
Eyes despaired in hunger
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Mahadevan Krishnan
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Ibnu Din Assingkiri 04 October 2013

...when we leave this world, we leave our wealth and titles...who knows the underprivilege dog feeder guy bring more than us to the eternity. I like it when the poet's observation gave birth to a 'soul' in a poem. as seen in this one. good work my friend. keep it up.

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Douglas Scotney 04 October 2013

worth thinking about, M.K.

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