Friday, May 6, 2011

Deserted Comments

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If you could see me now, you’d see how I’ve grown.
And maybe I’d know why you left for reasons unknown.
A departure you made, so sure you’d never be found.
A curse on you should history come around.
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Errol Anderson
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Lady Keva 06 May 2011

WOW! Great poem I can relate. Although I still see and know my father he has never actually been a real father figure to me throughout my life. This poem tells the exact way I feel about my dad, U couldn't have said it better. Keep up the good work, and I hope to read more of your poems.

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Errol Anderson

Errol Anderson

Jamaica, but now live in Canada.
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