Desert Comments

great job creats an image

This is like a desert folk song. A good attempt to portrait the desert panorama in five stanzas by Preeti.

I see the Oasis in your Desert Preets not only that the mysterious life too shines. Excellent!

PREETS! AWESOME WORK...GOIN'TO THE ABSTRACT SIDE FOR SOME POETIC JUSTICE....YOUR BEST WRITE YET, (MY OPINION) OF COURSE IM BIAS, AS I LOVE THIS MYSTIQUE STYLE...AND YOU DO IT WELL...IN SYNC...CRISP& TIGHT...I LOVE IT...TAKE A CURTSY...IM APPLAUDING'''''''''''''FRANK

Lovely job here Preets, I really enjoyed this. I love the desert, and one day, I plan to go....thanks for taking me there in words in the meantime... :)

nice little poem preeti.