Desert Trees-Haiku Comments

Haiku is very difficult to write. One needs real good thought to write a Haiku. Your haiku is very good and nice to read Tks for sharing Rgds Nooruddeen

I need this thought This relief you've brought Pain is lost But at what cost... all baren in desert... we must make it sweet. palm trees and coconut all bear good fruits and sweet...lolvey read mine... no separate ways, miss i miss and child.....woth school