Thursday, January 2, 2014

Desert Stream Comments

Rating: 5.0

A stream flowing through the desert,
Too scarce for its dwellers to see
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Ryan Telebwe
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Chinedu Dike 20 September 2014

This is definitely a good poem. An insightful and well articulated SIMILE employed to drive home the point. As the saying goes, a prophet is never duly recognized in his place of nativity. Lovely. Thanks for sharing.

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Ryan Telebwe

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