Saturday, April 11, 2009

Desert Storm Comments

Rating: 5.0

Replete of light against dark sky,
A vibrant halo speaks of change.
Wispy mares' tails hint peril is nigh,
Stealthily lurks on far-off range.
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James Ronan
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Susan Bagley 11 April 2009

What could be more lovely and exciting than a storm in the desert. Reminds me of John Denver song. This is lovely and very well penned. Susan

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