Wednesday, March 5, 2008

Desert Spirit Comments

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I roamed in the desert
The sand is before me
I continue on my path,
Then a castle rises in front of me.
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QalmeTari Misterres of Death Nat. Norville
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Andrew Blakemore 17 April 2008

A deeply spiritual piece of work Natasha, nice imagery too. Well done. Andrew

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Natasha, I am not a Christian, so, I'm glad your title didn't give the fact away that you obviously are. I might not have read it if it had. I'm glad that I found this poem tonight, however. My fiance and I spend a great deal of time out in the desert, and we have 'religious' experiences there quite frequently as well. It's so silent and so still....and if there is a god...I think we find him/her/it there too. Thanks for sharing.

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