Friday, November 13, 2009

Desert Spirit Comments

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I roamed in the desert
The sand is before me
I continue on my path,
Then a castle rises in front of me.
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Athena Goddess of Wisdom Lumis Light to all
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Aziz Alkaabi 13 November 2009

You should use the past tense and we will have some fscinating poem!

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