Thursday, March 23, 2006

Desert Song Comments

Rating: ★5.0

Life is water
Slipping through your fingers

No way to hold or preserve
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Laurence Overmire
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Patricia Gale 23 March 2006

Wonderful stated and good advice. Patricia

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Duncan Wyllie 23 March 2006

Drop your 'P's' but never your 'Q's' for questions need an answer.This has not affected the outcome of your write.In fact sometimes it's those little so-called imperfections that can make all the difference.You are a very tallented writer.Love Duncan

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