Wednesday, May 26, 2010

Desert Song Comments

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cries of my soul
on betrayal in desert
of dismay
like dusts and sands
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Sahar Sahar
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Yelena M. 03 June 2010

The flow of this piece and images appearing in my mind on reading made me feel somehow hypnotized. Beautiful piece, Sahar. With best wishes, Yelena.

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Afzal Shauq 01 June 2010

cries of my soul on betrayal in desert of dismay like dusts and sands drifted to dunes and taken up by winds and in shadows of cacti longing in sunsets hey start with bove meets with end very meaningfully, I really enjoyed the idea that you have raised here.. the expression is perfect with indirect and romantic view point..related to your sweet heart.. after a long silent rages flower buds erupting from beneath the stones

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