Sunday, September 24, 2017

Desert Sands Comments

Rating: 5.0

Drenched in gold
Every grain like salt
So beautiful and old
Every creature here
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Sister Frances
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Unnikrishnan E S 25 December 2018

Brevity makes this poem wonderful: Silence in shade A heat that burns Night is a blessing Die or quickly learn Stay out of the sun!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 25 September 2017

A very brief and compact composition! Nicely penned! !

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Edward Kofi Louis 24 September 2017

So beautiful and old! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Sister Frances 25 September 2017

Thank you for reading Edward.

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Rini Shibu 24 September 2017

Good one stay out of sun or you will burn..10

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Sister Frances 25 September 2017

I know..pretty logical. lol

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