Friday, August 3, 2012

Desert Sands Comments

Rating: 5.0

Invisible, amidst grains of sand;
blinding heat beads sweat that rivers run
from furrowed brow to hollow hands
that wipe along the sting that lands
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Diana Rosser
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Felicity Slaughter 30 September 2012

Wow. Incedibly descriptive. It has a sort of late 19th century feel. Great choice of words, it makes me look at desert in an entirely new way. Poetry at its best! !

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