Desert Rose Comments

Desert Rose. A great metaphor. Of hope and illusion both. Great write. Much poetic 10+

After revisiting this verse, Soul, I get another image. Perhaps Rose is a name...Desert Rose, a biker, traveling across country, back and forth, over a lifetime. First Rose becomes an acquaintance, a companion. Over time, the petals fade...Rose becomes a memory, and ultimately a legend. Magnificent work, Soul.

Fragrance soul cant be defeated, killed in any way....most important line in this poem. It is really a marvelous poem wisely delineated.

Soul, your distinguished colleagues have said it all. So there's nothing left to be said. Except maybe: Wow! And Wow Again! ! Also, your totally magnificent poem has inspired me to write Unwritten Soul. Hope you like it.

The qualities of the desert rose as it pertains to our lives is stunningly depicted in your words. To learn from the unselfish nature of this flower through your keen and detailed observations skills can be balm to many wounded hearts.

It is a marvelous metaphorical poem based on philosophy where we have to get a lesson from a desert rose. Desert rose, the nature guidance of life facing the mirages and lot of illusion, teaches us to stand against the hindrance of life. It may be quoted some lines..... no matter what you give to them, the smell of fragrance cant be killed by sword, and the smell is the spirit...devotee for better life Once again, nature taught me about life...Rose symbol of beauty and fumes we must be soft but not easily broken, if broken revive the new hope.. We should be soft but not to break easily. Gratitude for sharing this gem... 10/10

Magnificent work, Soul. The rose can be the metaphor for the one, the individual, the person. CAn the sand be the metaphor for the many- -the crowd, the mob, the unresponsive elements of humanity that often surround the sentient being? That one rose, standing aside, standing alone, may be teh one that offers hope, strength, and resolve. This is a terrific poem, Soul.

Oh My Goodness! ! ! ! ! I Don't Know Where To Began! ! ! Except What A Wonderously Beautiful Poem! ! ! ! ! Beautifully Written! ! ! ! So Moving! ! ! Love Thoughts And Feelings! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! And The Wonderful Description! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Thank You Sooo Dearly For Sharing! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! 10s! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

this poem has made the tears roll down my face really enjoyed reading it

A rich reflection of a rose that surges with the splendor of succes that swims through the swamp. Well done my friend.

Dandelions are taproots. Taproot motto: You can rip us up but you can't get rid of us. Good job, ric

Roses turn to garbage and garbage turns to roses. Good job, ric

Strong image understanding of the nature of our existence. Good work, ric

Wonderful work, you can almost smell the scent of the Desert rose in the air.

A marvellous sequence of images centred on the Desert Rose. I can't think of a better poem than this on the site, unless one of your own. maybe your name means Desert Rose. Tom billsborough

Beautifuil poem. wonderful imagination. dev

Absolutely stunning....I could see and feel the spirit....10+++

The night seems brighter by your whispering melody Lullabying desert with sweet enchanting fragrance Lay in frozen curse, stay strong to stand all night long Lovely written! Strong show of emotion. KW

Beautiful. I t intrests the brain and the imagination.

a good metaphor. enjoyed the read. if broken revive the new hope