Desert Romance Comments

and the desert can't help but wonder if the rain ever misses her too, or if time since their last visit has caused it to forget the last time they kissed. beautiful imagination... you are gifted with the faculty of imagination. pl. make the best use of it in poetry. thank you. tony

Hmmmmm...you didnt let me down. Very good. Makes me wonder if...somehere...someone...was wondering what you were doing and if you thought about him.

A nice metaphor of the longing of two hearts, separated as the sky above and the earth below.

Very good...you are a skilled poet indeed!

I really love thta first verse and the images it conveys

very well put, and very touching. when will the rain and desert meet again or will they be lost forever this time?

Long waited for a meet between rain and desert will be ended in tears of rain to pour love on the driest land again soon, as time fate them to meet again..just soon_Soul

allegorical and nicely put well conceived and written liked

Splendid description of a wild nature...... Indeed rain is a lover whose lover never relished by the sand.... Contrasting desert with greenery is phenomenal...... diction n syntax entertaining the thirst of a arid zone