Sunday, July 17, 2016

Desert Island Dreams Comments

Rating: 3.5

Day's cares sink, drown in sleep,
Waves of consciousness
Folded in the deep
To be replaced by rising tides of dreams.
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Tom Billsborough
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Valsa George 11 March 2019

When night arrives, we drown in sleep and our cares sink! We are then carried by the invisible wings of dreams and we travel to magic islands and lovely beaches where we create our own dialect in empty spaces and we carve out a new identity for us! I think we poets are more equipped to do that! A lovely write! A 10

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