Saturday, September 10, 2005

Desert Games Comments

Rating: 3.5

And the moon hesitated,
on the way home, at shift's end,
to look at heavy clouds of desert dust
which seemed to travel at
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Raynette Eitel 11 September 2005

'Desert Games' from Down Under. This is really lovely, Herbert. It is playful, warm, and so well written. Raynette

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Betty Wilde 10 September 2005

Absolutely lovely Herbert. I enjoyed this one.

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Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 10 September 2005

Nice Herbert! I loved the imagery.....and the thought of your new friend...... :)

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Allan James Saywell 10 September 2005

Herbert this is good enough to go in your e-book though most of your poems are long ones so you might have to do a book of about 700 short poems followed by 50 long poems otherwise they might run short on paper and another book on all the fun you have had with blokes like pearson, england, i wont name the others you could call it' WAR AND POETRY' OR' WHY WONT THE BLOOD WASH OFF' anyway all the best Herbert Warm regards allan

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