Friday, September 30, 2005

Desert Flower Comments

Rating: 1.8

And do you hear it, from afar
the melody, so sweet and sad?
It is not I who picked the star
but it is good and I am glad
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Ernestine Northover 01 October 2005

Definitely melodious Herbert. It flowed nicely and I enjoyed reading it. You certainly have a way with words. Sincerely Ernestine

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Herbert Nehrlich1 30 September 2005

It's the Magic, Mary. I can't seem to help it..... H

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Mary Nagy 30 September 2005

Very beautiful poem Herbert..........You better watch it, you may get Mahnaz's hubby ticked off! It's hard to compete with words like this. So lovely. sincerely, Mary

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Raynette Eitel 30 September 2005

This is just beautiful, Herbert. This is the kind of poem you ought to write all the time...makes me sigh and long for nights under the desert stars. Guess that would be my own back yard! :) Raynette

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Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 30 September 2005

Oh my......Are you in a romantic mood? Nice I enjoyed it! !

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