Desert Flower Comments

your work is very fluid, full of emotion. i am surprised to find another poet with ideas so close to mine. keep pouring your emotion into your work. and keep working to not let your emotion get the best of you. your poems are your relaease, take the gift you, ve been given and use it to the best aptitude. keep writing your heartfelt desires instead of giving in to them. another impressive write my friend. Jen

excellent poem deep thoughts -10 anjali

Very very good piece i say your poems r way better then mine

very closely look at self actions.........penned beautifully 10+

yet again, you left me saying wow. very great piece of work, from beginning to end. anyone can relate to this one. how many times we have felt this way, because of numerous reasons, are countless. very wonderful. i love it. you are a great writer!

It feels almost like they've lost a key possession or love in their life, and cannot go on without.

beautiful write.....shes that flower that you just can't touch.....very nice 10++

I really liked this poem wonderfully written

nicely penned thanks for sharing anjali

'so slow it burns not to cry' My favorite line. I love this poem also. It can relate to me and everyone else in one way or the other. Plus i felt that sensation also.

I really really know how you feel. I'm going through the same thing now. Really great poem...Keep up the good work.

all your poems are a work of art

few lines but loaded with meaning and wonderful thoughts

Very beautifully, and artisticly written. The feel that this piece portrays, almost makes you forget your talking about a desert flower fighting to survive. Same as the feelings we can feel. Once adored, once beautiful. Once cherished and well taken care of. But eventually we all become weeds.

i like this one too but different ending in a way... just an idea so noone will ever know wonder why i never grow other than that i loved it

very deep and touching. i like your style. Can't wait to read more

That one got to me - alot. Brilliant piece!

This is a really good poem. I think that you should write more poems

wow, that's my favourite! It's slightly similar to 'Giving Up' by me. The first two lines are awesome, well, the whole poem is, but the first two lines are best! A 10 mfrom me! Nice work, Keith! Thanks for sharing.

hai keith, thanks for sharing this. daily i experienced the same situation in my own life. but i lost my lover in accident.