Thursday, March 22, 2007
Desert Flower Comments
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The sun is high and hot in sky,
With his reckless rays on earth,
The ravishing storm huddles around,
But you are always soft and sound.
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Shah Nawaz
22 March 2007
gr8 work lal parameswar! go oon.. i was particularly thrilled to read the last lines.....i think u can cut shrt your poem to max 10 lines ... good luck and we expect splendid poems in near future
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7/28/2025 3:00:57 AM # 1.0.0
Great poem, I liked the way you have ended the poem with a question mark.