Wednesday, January 16, 2008

Deseo De Mi Corazon Comments

Rating: 5.0

Forgotten eyes, rolling thighs
My thoughts seem to wander,
Yet they always return to you.
In everything I believe, you are a part of me
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Jurietta Duraan 09 June 2008

My previous comment was stupid.... This poem is deep en it rings true to every person who have been consumed by love.... well written... write some more!

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Emancipation Planz 11 April 2008

so sad... has it mended yet?

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Jurietta Duraan 21 January 2008

I like the way you write very much.....

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