Desensitisation Comments

Jon, I think this is superb. Declan has proved himself correct though, in his comment below.... but a grand write. I am particularly taken by the expressiveness of the second line.

I like this poem... its simple and relays a feeling of 'no feeling' or detachment which we all know is the first sign of real pain.

Hi, found poem after you left me a comment. I agree with Declan about this poem-if I could only count the times I swore to never fall again. Pandora opened the box...hope flew out and thats why we fools, never really give up.

I know the sentiment Jon but it never lasts. Even flame proof moths feel the heat.