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..... and the dawn wondered at the pollution of the present humanity; sans Values! ! !

I see the same phenomenon in Pakistan.This is happening to all rivers and streams passing through the cities. They are crammed with garbage and polythene bags and water seems like sludge. There is a moan, a groan behind the silent beauty of this haiku........10/10. Regards Naseer

the sun would perhaps wonder whether yamuna has changed color...a very good 3 liner

Thought provoking truth in simple three lines...excellent10+++++++++