Saturday, January 9, 2010

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painted sky
tinted room
flying birds
dancing storm...
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lady grace
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 January 2010

come with me we’ll live free sky is blue can’t change hue................. .no hue and cry never ask why why to feel shy? always try you may succeed if you heed may be need if you are freed from bondage from old age with new page out of cage no rage only love only passion no question only answers.......jadia4708au

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Ravi Sathasivam 12 January 2010

'wisdom found quickly drain footnotes lost preface strain..' Beautiful flow of words I always like your thoughts and way of writing poems Great Madam Enjoyed reading it 10+

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Eyan Desir 09 January 2010

Wow Gracy you are gettin better and better An enjoyable read. Nice flow, good sylable count well executed......10+ sorry i have not been making poems these days.... I will be back no worries...

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