Tuesday, March 16, 2010

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smile and wave thats how i act
its other things that i lack
forgiving is not my best trait
i am impatient i dont know how to wait
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Michael Brock 20 April 2010

Good poem, almost seems like its not quite finished, but I like the flow, loved 'some of my darkness has been removed.' Really inventive. 'Beginning to comsume'.....again good wording thanks for sharing michael

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Crazy Vampire

Crazy Vampire

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