Description Poem by Crazy Vampire

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smile and wave thats how i act
its other things that i lack
forgiving is not my best trait
i am impatient i dont know how to wait
anger, it just comes naturally
it is not how i want ot be

i admit i have improved
you can say that some of my darkness has been removed
so maybe i can resume
to the feeling that is beginning to consume
everything i am inside and turning me into what i fear
it's now all coming in clear

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Michael Brock 20 April 2010

Good poem, almost seems like its not quite finished, but I like the flow, loved 'some of my darkness has been removed.' Really inventive. 'Beginning to comsume'.....again good wording thanks for sharing michael

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Crazy Vampire

Crazy Vampire

Hemet, California
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