Saturday, November 3, 2007

Descending Into Hell Comments

Rating: 5.0

I find no peace in sleep
No refuge in drink
Down into darkness I seem to sink
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Dorothy (Alves) Holmes
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Katherine Wiley 19 February 2008

Dorothy-this is a deep, heartfelt poem, addressing the subject without a lot of fancy words. I think this is the best way to write. You've done a beautiful job! Sincerely, kate

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Chuck Audette 07 November 2007

Scary! Liked the rhymes. Heads up on a spelling error in your title: Decending should be Descending. -chuck

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Dorothy (Alves) Holmes

Dorothy (Alves) Holmes

Baltimore, Maryland
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