Oh.
Time has slapped me in the face
The air was thick and settled
A new tick
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I like the pace of this poem....heart speeding in a hundred different directions.
I absolutely love this poem, it has so many good uses of illustration and imagery, but its soo true. Great Job!
I really like the free flowing format and the story is so relatable, but expressed in a unique, beautiful way. Love it!