Saturday, August 11, 2012

Dervishes And Mastery Comments

Rating: 5.0

Oh.
Time has slapped me in the face
The air was thick and settled
A new tick
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Aria Siren
COMMENTS
Amanda Laurent 23 October 2012

I really like the free flowing format and the story is so relatable, but expressed in a unique, beautiful way. Love it!

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Alla Simone 19 August 2012

I like the pace of this poem....heart speeding in a hundred different directions.

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Alexis ... 17 August 2012

I absolutely love this poem, it has so many good uses of illustration and imagery, but its soo true. Great Job!

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