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A masterful motivational mandate that is introspectively inductive.10/10

This is not my style of poem and it was impossible for me to follow the message it was trying to transmit to the reader. Therefore, I cannot score it high or recommend it to other readers. Regretfully. GW62

Well done on this poem. It flows rather well :)

This expresses the frustration of regret very well, Deb

All part of the learning process My friend in preparation for finding the right one

It's dream time in Fool's Paradise if not focussed on goals -well done Fred--. 10 anjali

I enjoyed the theme of this poem, just because I have gone though this very thing so many times in my life. Nicely written. ~Marshall Peter Cline II

Satanic seduction starts taking shape. CP

good write..a twist of distraction to reality re-focused..nice theme..

nice..i like it...it's interesting...sounds like someone got a little distracted and life smacked 'em in the face with reality...nice...real, honest. it's good.