Tuesday, May 19, 2009

Depths Comments

Rating: 5.0

The father whimpered as the liquid turned to depths of the sea.
if she threw herself in, then whos there to see?
its a motionless feeling.
a thought or a cry.
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Kesav Easwaran 31 May 2009

The whimpering sea...the tide motionless...its wrath...well, you create a strong sad imagery there, Grez...excellent write in terms of expression of emotions...excellent metaphors inside...thanks...10

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