Thursday, October 15, 2009

Depth Charges. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Heard for the first time
.................... the tide's mighty sound

Of watery rush to
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Fay Slimm
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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 29 October 2009

Fay, I think it's a fine symbolic poem covered in beautiful images. I know what about it is but that may be too abstract for some readers. I will give it easy 10 to charge its depth. Regards Naseer

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Tom Balch 19 October 2009

Lovely images and as Carol said a fantastic read, I too am ignoring the idiot below, stay happy regards Tom

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Carol Gall 15 October 2009

(ignoring idiot below) fantastic fay i feel like im right there 10

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James Mclain 15 October 2009

no one.. except a beached whale..0... :) ...iip

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