Friday, January 10, 2020

Deprived Comments

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Sex-deprived
And sleep-deprived
He keeps toiling away
Night and day,
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Aparna Chatterjee
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Aparna Chatterjee 16 January 2020

Dear Akham, Kingsley and Anil, Thanks for giving your reviews and sharing your views.

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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh 10 January 2020

Life of the poor and deprived very well portrayed in this short poem.

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Kingsley Egbukole 10 January 2020

No, no sleep, all work endangers life.

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Anil Kumar Panda 10 January 2020

Beautiful drop about struggles of life to keep alive. Loved it.

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