Depression's Life Strangling Anaconda Comments

well u described what u think of depression well.......nicely written...... liked your comparision too....

Once again very well crafted, your poetry is way better than mine, with a lot more experience. i can connect to almost every poem you have, depression is in everyone, just different stages i slip in an out all the time keep writing!

You really said it all in this first poem. The second really -in my opinion- wasn't needed but that's my opinion and we all know that that really doesn't mean much. I liked your approach to depression and the Anaconda is as good an omage as there is. Maybe the poem maybe needs a little fine tuning but other than that it wasn't difficult to follow. Keep up the nice work.