Tuesday, June 23, 2015

Depression Poem Comments

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Depression, depression just go away,
you make my day so gloomy and grey.
I just can't deal with how you make me feel,
if you go away it would just be ideal!
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Naomi Louise Short
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Allotey Abossey 25 June 2015

Excellent display of skills and words... Depression is a thief of success and joy... It comes to be overcomed.. Stay blessed my friend

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Thanks ever soo much for these lovely and inspiring comments! !

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Thanks ever so much for your comment it means a lot to me I have got back to writing poetry but I try to do my best to write about topics that mean a lot to me and I write from the heart so thanks x

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thanks it means a lot

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Akachukwu Lekwauwa 23 June 2015

We all do battle with depression sometimes. You portrayed it well. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem 'Isthmus Of Pain And Joy'

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Akachukwu Lekwauwa 23 June 2015

That's a battle we all fight sometimes, battle against depression. You portrayed it well. Thanks for sharing with us. Please read my poem 'Deer Hunter'

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Thank you and i'm only a young beginner poet so thanks.

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