Monday, September 26, 2005

Depression Monster Comments

Rating: 5.0

Spinning faster and faster, spiraling down, down,
Depression creates a suffocating heaviness
which consumes and smothers your entire being.
As i recall this space in time,
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Brian Dorn 14 October 2006

A stunning description vividly detailing the depths of depression... well done, Charmaine. Brian

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Jimmy Watkinson 20 September 2006

The imagery is so real that I can actually relate to this. I know exactly the pains that can bring forth such emotive language. Charmaine, you shall never fail to impress me. Continue your marvellous works. If I can sum this poem up in one word it'll have to be - 'wow'! jw

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