Wednesday, October 31, 2007

Depression Isn'T Obvious Suicide Is Comments

Rating: 5.0

Depression isn't obvious but suicide is.
My pain nobody sees.
My my mangled body they shall see.
My head was all but a mess.
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Amy Louise Kerswell
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Depression 06 May 2019

This poem made me feel depressed

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Abby Stringer 03 October 2018

It's never too late. Help is there and the right help, helps.

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Hannah Williams 05 May 2018

Very powerful, Hope you're okay. Take care.10/10/

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Mike M 26 April 2018

Really powerful Stay strong We care

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Naila Rais 17 April 2018

I can really relate to it.... I would like you read my poem In the mid of the night, depression you are killing me too.... Keep courage.... Well expressed... Naila

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Beebee 29 March 2018

I can relate to this poem If you are not going through it you would never understand

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Tarzan 20 March 2018

That's so sad.I feel for her.

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Why the would u write a poem bout suicide....? ; -;

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Val A. 16 January 2018

Excellent, heart felt writing. The pain, hurt, hopelessness jumps off the page along with the Insight, Intelligence, Compassion and Caring. Keep writing.

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Richard Wlodarski 30 November 2017

Amy, you've had the courage to so honestly open up. And look at the people that you're helping. I commend you on the great job that you've done with this poem. And please, never give up!

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Kat Anomymous 04 March 2017

This is lovely and so true. I am very happy I found a poem that is everything I'm feeling right now. You might be a life saver. Thank you so much. You have skill and I really hope you share some more. Please do whatever it takes to feel better.

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Cheryl Davis Miller 18 October 2016

I hear you and wish to hear more from you, climb up from the well, you've fallen into. Find your voice and scream out, rage if you can than stand and speak out again and again. be well

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Thelone X 28 April 2015

Ive got to read a poem that reflects my own feelings in front of my class, so im choosing this one. I hope you dont mind ~A.B

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Desirae Brown 05 April 2009

this poem reflects how I feel I've been diagnoised as depressed by17 doctors and my parents still don't believe them

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John Gein 10 December 2008

amazing poem. it's one of my favorites

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Hannah Thomssen 21 January 2008

this poem is so true i love this poem and i am going to tell everyone about it

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