Depression In Early Spring Comments

Being irritated by something over some issue, one can never know what kinds of feelings one would get. However, that could be te ideal moment to note th feelings down, and the rest of the world will enjoy a poem. Thanks very much for the well written thought provoking poem. x

Such an interesting write by Erica Jong👍👍👍

the whole city sky palely flaming The poets are dead, the city dying. I am a corpse who moves a pen that writes....//.... A very horrible and depressing picture presented.

Real depressive. But more than depressing it echos a sense of rebellion.

I am a corpse who moves a pen that writes. I am a vessel for a voice that echoes. I write a novel & annihilate whole forests. I rearrange the cosmos by an inch. Wow, what a lovely creation. Superb.So great poetic skill. Amazing poem. 10++++

This is wonderful poem reflecting upon deep philosophy of life. 'I am a corpse who moves a pen that writes. I am a vessel for a voice that echoes. I write a novel & annihilate whole forests. I rearrange the cosmos by an inch. '... shows your extraordinary talent as a poet. Thanks for sharing.

As spring is all of life, depression at its early chiefly concerns the world with war and peace despite great poets' works falling dead on eyes and ears........outstanding piece...........thanks for sharing

With the muse of a pen that writes! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.