When years passed away,
With no one dear,
The eyes filled with tear,
And the heart with fear....
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a thoughtful poem in melodious tone that euphemizes the bane of depression.But the words, eloquentally overcome......
A very deep subject Naila Rais you had chosen most disease are psychosomatic depression leads all and your poetrY is well over all TALL EXTREMELY WELL COMPOSED
It is the depression I hate Me this depression does get, ..... this is the vicious circle of depression, but I never surrender to it, I must find out something to get rid of it, ..... well penned, congrats and thanks for sharing
You have written well and captured the feelings on a painful subject - a very deserved POD.
Very right poem to be selected as pod... congratulation dear...Naila Rais...
At the outset accept my hearty Congratulations for the honour for this outstanding poem.
after every bitterness- Then came a DEAR, The depression, which I fear // wisely entitle O' Depression unchaste you are route to route port to port of the reign of mind cultivate I into me the hate for you....
This little one is too great..... Thnks sir for your visit..... Naila
A very nice poem with a sweet flow. Depression is a silent killer and one should avoid it at any cost. Loved it. Congrats.
Thnks sir......... Hope your visit will be soon with another motivating words..... Naila
A wonderful poem! All seven stanzas have been rightly put in order justifying lucid flow of expression with significant coherence and cohesion! Many congratulations for this insightful piece of poetry being chosen as Poem of the Day!
A well penned poem of the day, Naila. Congrats for being chosen....................
You have captured the pain of depression in your poem with such emotion. Thank you for sharing Naila.
Then came a DEAR, The depression, which I fear, Standing with a knife, Chasing throughout the life..... Stand out, see the nature. look at the innocence in children, nature is so pure and fine...... look at the sun rays falling on the dancing leaves....... then pray to God Almighty.... you are sure to smile...... depression will drop the knife in front of yu. tony
Your comments are always appreciated...... Every time motivating the readers.... Naila
Well done, you have captured the pain and all-encompassing feelings of depression.. Not an easy task to do! ! !
Your poem is an insight into depression; images come in plenty. I like the writing, also how the story line hangs together. My own take on the subject... might be a long winded one. t Thank for the post/poem.
Depression is also a lesson of this life.... the world can be seen in a different way with a extra ordinary feelings...
Ohhh yes..... If you know how much it hurt, you'll never try to hurt someone.... Thnx for your valuable words... Naila
U most welcom A beautiful heart and a sacred soul never hurt any one either in depression, or after or before depression. If he hurt som1 by chance then he cant sleep till he atone for that...
You really got my attention with the way you describe depression
Lonely nights! ! But there is Someone out there! From the Heavens above! ! ! ! Watching over you. YOU ARE NOT ALONE. Thanks for sharing.
Then came a DEAR, The depression, which I fear, Standing with a knife, Chasing throughout the life..... Loved the end poetess.(10+++)
Human being is a puppet in the hand of fate.. Thomas Hardy.... One should overcome depression..