Tuesday, February 14, 2012

Depression Hurts Comments

Rating: 3.5

I feel so depressed all around I see people smiling and laughing enjoying every little thing in there life.
I look around and ask my self 'why can't that be me? '
I try and try to get out of my depression.
It hurts me to see you knowing you love me and care.
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Nicole Donoghue
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Crimson Soul 15 February 2012

Seems more of a description-it holds promise; but the emotion you put through in this is felt as I read it, good work :)

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Nicole Donoghue 14 February 2012

Just be honest and tell me what you think!

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