Depression Comments

Thank you for your comment for my poem, 'Dreams are where love -' You express to reflect very well. Life experience are where Muses' discover special 'Ink' I've 'done a 'Dig' from the depths of my own antiquity, especially for you; no other comment will serve as well. ...louie levy -------- Depression Freed Soul searching Within tortuous chambers Imprisoned spirits among restless walls Loves light in darkness Blind visions of past torments Captured freedom Self imposed Rescued feelings Liberating-ly, composed.. © 1992...louie levy ------- Desolation Self thoughts of visions Obscured of ones self Lost in caverns of oblivious light Bats in a belfry Not one here in sight Darkened silence Searching for sounds Fleeting feelings Unleashed of bounds Kneeling for guidance No escape! Trapped by our own... M i n d l e s s t a p e~~~~~~ as such, the mindless tape of machines, unlike our own, void of soul, emulate what we think is spiritual. We become that which we extend of ourselves, a mechanism, a' times, out of control. © 1995...louie levy

i really enjoyed this. very well written

That was a very good poem, was it true? If not you have a great imagination.